Jack Union: Ab Initio Of Editing

So I’m now sorting out the edit of this first story.

It’s crazy how different my writing style was when I first wrote it. This first complete draft was began in 2007, but the idea came to me in 2003. 

The edit is making me very proud of my work as the story is ready, it’s just improving how it is conveyed to the audience.

I may post a little up as a preview, if anyone wants me to!

I won’t be offended if you don’t!